கடமை!

உன் கிட்ட கொஞ்சம் பேசனும்..

தாரளமாக பேசலாமே!

நீ அவளை காதலிக்கிறாயா???

ஏன் இந்த கேள்வி??!!

இல்லை, நீ கஷ்டப்பட்டாலும் பரவாயில்லை… ஆனால் என்னை மட்டும் அவளிடம் நெருங்க விட மாட்டேன் என்கிறாயே. அதனால் தான் கேட்டேன்…

அடேய் மடையா… எப்போது அவள் என் கை பிடித்தாலோ.. அப்போதிலிருந்து நான் அப்படி தான் இருக்க வேண்டும்… அது காதல் இல்லை….. என் கடமை…

பொறுமை இழந்து பளீர் என அடித்தது அடை மழை!

சிரித்துக்கொண்டே வாங்கிக்கொண்டது அவளின் குடை!

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27 thoughts on “கடமை!

  1. Hey, this is good,but still..i love Kudai more than anything! Especially those last lines…simply love it! I don’t know which time am telling this to you! But still…

        1. @Shruti..

          Oru subject pathi experience iruntha thaan kavithai varum nu kidayathu…
          Even I’ve wrote about sri lankan tamils and suicide… and may write about death…
          Then does that mean i’ve experienced these situations…

          Poor girl…. Valaranum innum… 🙂

  2. Is it a poem? Cn u pls translate if u don’t mind 😛
    BTW, is ur name Raja? I just want to know hw I can address u 😉 😉

    1. @Swaram…

      Not a poem as such… Wrote as a conversation between rain and umbrella in 55 fiction form…
      And the conversation goes like this..

      Hey, I want to speak with you something..
      Yes, please.
      Do you love her?
      Why do you ask me this question?
      I’m asking you because, even you are ready to trouble youself, but notready to allow me to touch her.
      Hey Idiot! From the moment she held my hand, I’ve to behave like that… It’s not my love for her, but my duty…
      Losing the patience, came a big blow from the rain.
      Received it with smile, the umbrella that was in her hands.

      Hope you got it…

      Ppl in my home call me as Raja.. But my official name is Bala.. Just address me by whatever way u like… 🙂

    1. @Gils…

      Thanks Gils ‘n’ welcome here to my space…

      Eppadiya??? Thaeriyalaye…. athu thaana varuthu….
      Kudaikul mazhai… innum paakala antha padatha… but enaku pidicha romba azhagana title ithu…

      1. antha padam title matum thaan nallarukum..yaar petha pullayo..ennala maatikaatheenga..antha padam poster paathalay pathu adi thalli odi poidunga..marana mokka movie

        1. @Gils…

          // antha padam poster paathalay pathu adi thalli odi poidunga.. // — lol…

          kelvi pattirukken… mokkayo mokkainu….
          ithe mathiri thaan pachhai kuthirai nu oru padam title vachu poitu…. nonthutten…. 😦

          1. pacha kuthirai is one kochai guthirai…namitha vachu matter scene kaatrathukagavay edutha padam….yuck movie…partibanku enthaan buthi ipdi pogutho

            1. @Gils….

              ha ha ha… very true…
              Puthiya paathai mathiri padam kamikirenu oru mookai paathayile kootitu poitaan…
              Usually like his movies for a different thinking… but romba differentave think panittan ithula…

  3. Dai Bala, wat hap to u?? Yerkanave Chennaila mazhai pozhiyudhu… Idhula ub blog-la Kavidhai mazhai pozhiyure?

    V.Gud da. Though it’s not like a poem, it’s poetic.
    Got inspired by Thabu Shankar??

    I too thot of writing abt “Kudaikkul mazhai” stuff but “gils” have posted b4 me.

    Unmaiya Sollu. Yaar andha “Aval”???

    1. @Kaarthik…

      Thanks da!

      May be chennai mazhai effectnu nenaikiren da… 😛
      Thabu shankars writing… chance illa… it wud be too romantic da…. this one can’t stand before his writing da…

      Anatha ‘aval’ oru pen… oru karpanai… avlothan da….

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