நிஜத்தின் நிழல்!

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உன்னிடம் ஒன்று சொன்னேன் – என்றும்

உன் நிழலாய் இருப்பேன் என்று…

இன்றோ! என்னை நானே கேட்டுக்கொண்டிருக்கிறேன்..

நிஜம் இல்லாமல் நிழல் மட்டும் எப்படி வாழ்வதென்று?!

உன் பதிலுக்காக… காத்திருக்கிறேன்…

வேறெங்குமில்லை… உன் கல்லறையில் தானடி!!

 

Just got inspired by the movie 7/g Rainbow Colony…

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10 thoughts on “நிஜத்தின் நிழல்!

  1. Good try…..But, honestly, Compared to your previous kavithais, this one is only OK…But, then, we are ameteurs and writing comes by practise…Expect more from you…..Keep writing!This one came up just as I read through your kavithai, maybe my version of your idea:

    Andru…..
    Endrum un nizhalaai irupaen endraen…
    Indro….
    Nijathai thozhaitha nizhalaai….
    Kaathirukraen…
    Un kallaraiyil!

    Chumma oru try kuduthaen…..

    1. @Savitha…

      Thanks akka for the honnest comments !
      I’ll try to write something good…

      I like your version of the same idea…
      It really has that ‘poetic flavour’ in it…
      Why dont u put this in ur blog???

  2. Dai Bala, eppodhanda thirundhuva?? Innum ennada feelings vittuttu irukke?

    Innum 7/G kaalathulaye irukkiye!!! Go n watch today’s release LOVE AAJKAL (Translation : Indraiya Kaadhal)

    1. @Kaarthik…

      Dai.. kettupona thana da thirunthanum….
      ithu feelings illai da… kavitthai…

      7/G kaalathila illa da…. antha kalatha pathi oru writing than….
      btw, translation of Love Aaj Kal is Love Yesterday and Today…
      aathavathu… Kaathal Indru Andru…

  3. Dai enakke Hindi solli thariya???

    Aaj means Today
    Kal means Sterday and also it means tomorrow

    But “aajkal” is a single word which means Nowadays.

    If u want to mean Today and Tomorrow, u should say
    aaj aur kal.
    There is a famous movie “Kal Aaj aur Kal” which means “Netru Indru Naalai”.

  4. “Enakke” because I have been in Mumbai n Kolkata and know Hindi a bit more than u. Dats y.

    Dint see the movie yet. I heard the movie is about the Live-in relationship between Saif and Deepika. She gets married to another guy after their break up, etc. etc. Later she comes back to Saif.
    What a LOVE!!!

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